Post-Hardcore/Metalcore C4C


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10-16-2010, 02:29 PM
I guess it's more metalcore, but it has some post-hardcore influences in it.

I'll C4C, just post a link and I'll get back to is ASAP.

EDIT: I always forget to upload :C.

10-16-2010, 04:21 PM
Ill be critting as i go
-I really like the piano intro, and when the guitar comes in alot. Very Good.
-I like the breakdown kinda riff that follows it too,and the tapping riff too
-wasnt too fond of the next breakdown but its not because its bad just because it wasnt as good as the first one :D
-bars 45-52 are good, i like the chaotic nature of this part
-53-69 is alright just generic
-75-85 i really like the use of chords and piano here
-i also like the outro of piano sweeps

overall 8/10 it could be a little stronger in some places but still very good.


10-19-2010, 03:26 PM
Piano intro was nice. Guitar fits it, but change seems to be pretty fast to second riff. 20- on is beautiful, but nothing really special. Your breakdown was not really the best one I've heared. I think personally that breakdown is not necessary in every core song. 45- riff is pretty good, but drums ruin the riff. Think of something else. 62- on song had new kinda powerfull riff, it was nice. 78- on the riff is pretty beautiful. Nice ending riff.