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10-17-2010, 08:21 AM
Yeah, so I ended up in something pretty groovy style. Pretty highly lamb of god influenced. I hope you enjoy. C4C!
10-17-2010, 10:47 AM
Intro is very Lamb of God-like. I like the groove to it, it's catchy. The verse is also groovy as hell, it's really solid and just sounds like it should get people bouncing. Break is good, panic chords there sound solid. I like the little "descent" at the end of the phrase. Verse 2 is pretty good, it just seems a bit "off" with the triplets. It's still a good riff, just maybe no there. Then the break repeats. I don't really care for the first tempo change too much, it just seems to repetitive and not great. Verse repeats, and a solo comes in. The solo sounds pretty good, but I think it ends a bit too suddenly. You use another riff and the song ends, but I think it's too sudden again.
Overall a very good song, a few parts that need to be polished, but it's still very groovy.
10-17-2010, 10:53 AM
Everything is really cool, except for the fact that most of your measure phrasings are in groupings of three, which i'm not totally digging, cuz it hurts the flowing feel that groove has to me. The solo is very in the style of lamb of god.
Don't bother crtting any of my stuff
10-22-2010, 10:53 PM
Intro - Pretty cool
Verse 1 - Sounds like the intro, maybe change it a bit?
Break - Really didn't like those random G#/A parts; not bad overall
Verse 2 - Pretty good
Chorus - Better
Breakdown/verse 3 - Again, the G#/A thing was really awkward
Verse 4 - Pretty good
Solo - Chaotic stuff, well done
Chorus - I'd put in a big drum outro starting bar 130. Bar 129 is really cool.
Not my favorite genre, but it was definitely well written, good job!
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