View Full Version : Eulogy [GP5]
02-19-2011, 08:04 PM
hey guys this is a very sad song I wrote about a family that lost one of their own as a result of a cruel battle
Mean Mr Mustard
02-19-2011, 08:55 PM
Anyways, its a great theme, but I would add something else at bar 50 to make it a bit thicker or change it a bit, or alternatively you could change the modified theme, as it sounded pretty similar to the theme. Good job though, it made me weep.
02-23-2011, 08:33 PM
thank you for the crit, i will add a bit more variance to it.
02-24-2011, 05:03 AM
Hahahah, I laughed for a year when I heard the intro and then re-read your description of the song xD
Life Is Brutal
02-26-2011, 09:55 PM
Very good theme and sound, although it seems to repeat too much. Your description of it is rather hilarious though, despite how serious a concept the song may or may not be.
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