Rough idea phc (gp5 mid)


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patrickaumon
02-21-2011, 02:29 AM
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So far, I have so many things on my computer and I really don't know what to do with them.

I really need some suggestion on what to put in those multiple riffs that are in my sigs + this one I am posting

Mean Mr Mustard
02-22-2011, 10:38 PM
Nice intro. For that first bar, it sounds better to me if you let the notes ring out like you do later. However, its only the open string note...you dont move into anything else. It'd sound better if you had the four measures off the open string note and then had the next 4 measures off another powerchord, like 5th fret or 8th or something. Then just take this chord progression and use it for the bar 10 riff. Too many opens. The extra guitar sounds nice though.

Bar 35 sounds pretty good as a chorus, leaving me to think that bar 27 could be a good verse. I think that you could continue this by going into a second verse thats different from that first verse, maybe a slower one or a more melodic one to contrast with the faster one at bar 27, and then lead into another chorus.