Doom metal first song (GP5, C+C)


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IntoEternity22
02-21-2011, 10:27 PM
This is the first song I've ever written for my melodic death/doom metal project. Constructive criticism and any tips are encouraged. Feel free to tweak it as you see fit; I'll consider all revisions that improve my song and help me become a better songwriter. Thanks!