Melodic Metalcore Intro Thingy


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02-28-2011, 04:59 PM
I just started this about an hour ago. Let me know what you think and how I should continue.

I think I've been listening to too much It Prevails...

02-28-2011, 05:06 PM
sounds pretty good to me .. Very good actually xd

02-28-2011, 05:14 PM
I like this a lot, keep up the good work!

02-28-2011, 05:14 PM
Badass dude! I wish I wrote that!

02-28-2011, 05:17 PM
Yeah. Good Job man. Very ADTRish :)

02-28-2011, 05:21 PM
Yeah. Good Job man. Very ADTRish :)
Say wha?

Anyway, I'm still editing this part. I'll upload a new version some time soon.

EDIT: New version up.

02-28-2011, 06:25 PM
Really like it, messed around with it + I added Bass and Drums :) x

02-28-2011, 06:28 PM
Thanks man. I appreciate it!

02-28-2011, 06:50 PM
lil' bit more :P

gonna go do some homework that's in for tomorrow that I shoul've been doing :rolleyes:

02-28-2011, 09:05 PM
Thanks a lot man! I took some of your drum ideas. I like your fills.

New version up!

03-01-2011, 12:27 AM
Not really my style usually but it is pretty damn good and catchy. The Rhythm and Big Lead Melody at bar 45 is great and something you can definitely build off of. Drums are simple but fit what you have so far. Keep it up, interested to hear it as it progresses.

C4C Would be appreciated on "Who's Listening" in my sig :cheers:

03-01-2011, 09:11 PM
New version up. And it is no longer just an intro.

03-01-2011, 10:29 PM
New version up.


03-01-2011, 10:32 PM
First post.

Mean Mr Mustard
03-02-2011, 09:45 AM
Hey its really nice. I loved the chorus section at bar 45. However, its a little weird when the clean part comes in. I would have the drums either come in at the beginning of that part, or have something like a reverse cymbal in bar 61 then a cymbal hit in bar 62 to introduce the clean section. And the clean section itself was really nice, I could imagine it would continue with a nice guitar solo overtop of it.

03-02-2011, 10:32 AM
Really enjoyed it. Loved goatsock's additions!

03-03-2011, 07:39 PM
Some really good parts in there, keep on working! :)