atmospheric soft piano song !~!C4C!~!


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slayerfrk
03-08-2011, 10:25 PM
this is something i made a couple weeks ago, im not to proud of it but its ok at best. yes it is kind of repetitive.

Joshua1207
03-08-2011, 11:15 PM
I don't really like the left hand piano but the right hand one is nice. The harp comes in very nice. I like that harp riff. Builds a nice vibe to it. Don't think it should of stopped playing. I think you should make the harp a bigger part of the song.
The song repetitive but in this kind of music thats okay usually. I can't say I liked the trumpet part at all. The warm pads were a nice addition, helping build the mood to the song. Don't really have much more to say, keep building upon it. Try to be less repetitive though for the left hand piano in my opinion.

If you would critic this now http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1419537