Melodic Metalcore song (GP5, Midi) C4C


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goatsock
03-13-2011, 01:21 PM
I just made this today, it's not my favourite of genres but it seems to be what you guys write a lot so I thought I'd give it a go. It's not finished yet but I've got some more ideas.

Sounds alright with/without RSE.

I'd like to see what you guys think :) x

RockFanatic_X
03-13-2011, 01:49 PM
I donīt think its Melodic Metalcore. I donīt even think its Metalcore. I would say its some kind of Post-Hardcore. Listen to The Downfall of us All - A day to remember <----sounds alot like yours.
Well, and I donīt like it...its just my opinion. You wrote it in Major...and just sound to happy to be Metalcore :D Listen to Bullet for my Valentine...this is Melodic Metalcore ^_^ and sry for my bad english iīm german :D

goatsock
03-13-2011, 03:15 PM
No it's fine.. I knew I'd get shit for trying to put a genre to it :P

synestershadows
03-13-2011, 03:24 PM
I donīt think its Melodic Metalcore. I donīt even think its Metalcore. I would say its some kind of Post-Hardcore. Listen to The Downfall of us All - A day to remember <----sounds alot like yours.
Well, and I donīt like it...its just my opinion. You wrote it in Major...and just sound to happy to be Metalcore :D Listen to Bullet for my Valentine...this is Melodic Metalcore ^_^ and sry for my bad english iīm german :D
I'm gonna have to agree and disagree with you. This does sound more like ADTR than anything, but BFMV in NOT melodic metalcore.

All of these are melodic metalcore:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8GkpygVG6E
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r2QFDMlitsE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rsWaqU5n94I
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuUcHTF-t7o

That said, this song is pretty mediocre, but I can tell you're improving. Keep working at it!

dylann
03-13-2011, 11:23 PM
hey man heres your comment back thanks for mine.

im not really a fan of metal or metalcore music but for what it is i think it is pretty good the riff at 38 to 45 is a nice change from the normal open palm mute breakdowns you hear so thumbs up for that! and the next bit straight after at 46 is intresting to its a very big sound and i could imagine that recorded with real guitar sounds and effects

one thing you maybe need to fix is that you have a few points where all instruments stop except the guitar its okay to do it but i think it sort of breaks this song down to much... delete bar 9 and 10 and see how 8 flows into 11? that works but saying that that was the bit i liked the most out fo the guitar stopping bits haha