C4C Power Metal - To Battle We Ride


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Taco_Bastard
03-14-2011, 08:53 AM
A song a buddy and me made about a month ago. It's practically finished aside from an outro, but I've ran into a snag. I know this song needs something more, but I'm not really sure what or where I would add it. Some advice would be appreciated. Btw, this song was wrote with the intention of vocals over top of it, so keep that it mind.

brokenwizard
03-14-2011, 09:04 AM
Could do with a few more lead break perhaps, between chorus and verse for instance, maybe the harp was intended for this but the arpegios aren't as impressive as say a maiden-esque harmonised section, it just breaks things up a little, gives the vocalist a rest etc. Hope that helps.

Taco_Bastard
03-14-2011, 09:59 AM
Yeah, I can see some leads going there. We were focusing more on song structure that leads, which helped progress the song, but led to this problem. Appreciated.