Pop-Punk song


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03-26-2011, 01:16 PM
here is a quick song I created last night, it only has guitars so far. I would like some feedback as this is one of the first songs I have written. I am also stuck when it comes to a vocal melody line, so if someone would be willing to help out I would really appreciate it.

Thanks in advance

03-26-2011, 02:57 PM
Well like you said, it's just the guitar part. There wasn't really that much too it. It was kind of repetitive, but most pop punk songs are so that's not necessarily a bad thing. The most important thing is to come up with a good vocal melody. I would suggest playing the song and just humming along to try to come up with the melody.

C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1425353

03-26-2011, 03:38 PM
I was just going for something simple as a first song I am trying to complete, I have more complex stuff, but can never get them to how I like them or how to fit them in somewhere. I will adding a bass part to it eventually, but for drums I don't know how to tab them out in the tab editor program.