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improof
03-30-2011, 04:35 PM
Hey

here's an older song from me. Please give a comment and rate it...so maybe "x" out of 10 ;)

(GP6 is in the zip-file)

hope you'll enjoy it.

greez
improof


PS: For the "MIDI-ONES":

Lyrics:

[Verse 1]
Dear loved one.
I send these words to you.
'Cause I know that I fell in love with you ba-by.

Dear loved one.
Can you hear me cry?
I send you all my tears.
That I can show my pain.

[Pre-Chorus]
You know that you in-jured me.
Once you hur-ted me.
But I love you a-ny-way
'cause you are the girl for me.

[Chorus]
And I think a-bout.
What will be in fu-ture.
Will you come to me and say that
At that time you loved me much.

Will you be the one.
That I can love for-e-ver.
That I can kiss all days.
'Cause she loves me like her-self.

[Verse 2]
Dear loved one.
Now I can't make a smile.
And I know I must be sure.
That you don't want me ba-by.

Dear loved one.
Can I say you're mine.
Or will you hurt me then.
As you do it a-ny-way.

[Pre-Chorus]
Can't you be a bit nic-er.
I don't want to loose
to loose your full at-ten-tion
but I want it an-o-ther way.

[Chorus]
And I think a-bout.
What will be in fu-ture.
Will you stay with me and be my
girl 'til the end of time.

Will you be the one.
That I can want for-e-ver.
That I can take all days.
'Cause she loves me like her-self.

[Pre-Chorus]
Now I see that you're go-ing.
You won't love me now.
Is there a time you could love me
I can't be-liev it 'cause you are just dumb.

[Chorus]
And I think a-bout.
I think a-bout the fu-ture.
Can I think a-bout the nights.
I could be with you.

Will you be the one.
That I can love for-e-ver.
But I think it will be ne-ver.
'Cause you don't like me a-ny-way.

davyyy
03-30-2011, 08:27 PM
Wow, this was quite good for a pop song, I really like the chord change when it switches to the prechorus, kind of not what you would normally expect, but in a good way. The only thing I would change is maybe make another part, like a bridge or something, after the solo, because it feels a tad like incomplete, but other than that, I could definatly hear it on the radio. :P