Seafaerer [Melodic Metal] (c4c)
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04-15-2011, 01:41 PM
Might be a bit Viking-y (at a slower tempo anyway). If it evokes images of pirates and battles (and death) at sea, I've done my job.
04-16-2011, 11:38 AM
Well, I usually like your shit, but I'll shoot you a crit and I'll see what I have to say.
From the beginning:
I think the rhythm you use sounds a bit strange, instead of four 32nd notes it might sound better with two 32nds and a 16th as the gallop. In measure 2 the first interval in track 1 clashes, I made it 33 instead of 23 and it works a lot better.
This sounds like old-school melodeath, I dig it. At the Gates/In Flames style. It's cool. I like the harmonies in the verse, but maybe try making it different from just straight thirds? Maybe another interval here and there.
Cool solos, I really like the harmonized one.
Honestly there's not so much to say here, everything except what I mentioned works well, there's a solid feeling that isn't ever broken, and you've got a really effective outro.
Recorded and with some good mid screams this'll be really cool.
Think you could drop me a crit on this thing I just finished?
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