Unfinished Melodic Progressive Metal/(Some Djent)


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joeryer
04-19-2011, 12:43 PM
Need ideas on how to progress this further, been bugging me for weeks!

Hope you guys can help!

Mean Mr Mustard
04-20-2011, 12:38 AM
Wow, I really really enjoyed that whole intro section, very nice! I suggest you stray away from that section a little earlier though. A nice song structure would be: that sweetass intro you have -> a very short clean transition or something -> some djenty heavy riffs -> a clean break -> a reprise of that intro, as an epic outro

GuitarFreak1387
04-20-2011, 04:07 PM
to be honest, i cant find a single thing that i don't like. everything flows well into each other.
good job.

joeryer
04-21-2011, 05:57 PM
to be honest, i cant find a single thing that i don't like. everything flows well into each other.
good job.

Thanks a lot mate!

robertito696
04-21-2011, 10:56 PM
I agree the intro could be recycled to make an awesome ending. Other than that it was fantastic. It flows and grooves really well without getting boring or repetitive.

Nemesis@Germany
04-22-2011, 09:07 AM
hm.. maybe you could try to apply the "movement" in your rhythm also to your melodies?