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bmathew
04-19-2011, 10:28 PM
Hi everyone, its been a while since I posted. I've definitly sat down and reworked my structure and need your help. I started this song today and I need critiques to send me in the right direction and if anyone is willing to add a drum section to this please do see as I will appreciate it alot. I am not very skilled with using the drums as I have only used them few times. Thanks again

Wquennasar
04-19-2011, 11:51 PM
I actually quite liked this. Get rid of that god-awful breakdown (48-57) and it's really pleasant.

bmathew
04-20-2011, 12:15 AM
Lmfao thanks brotha and yeah I was kinda drunk when I got around to the breakdown so no worries, that will be taken care of, glad to know I'm getting somewhere. :liplick:

Christopher S
04-20-2011, 05:38 AM
Something like this? =)

bmathew
04-20-2011, 07:25 PM
Oh my god that is awesome, could you add anything on the updated one? If you could write a simple loop for the solo and then something for the breakdown that would be much appreciated