Proggish Djent dong (Full)


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joeryer
04-25-2011, 04:41 PM
This is a more recent song of mine, a full song in a djenty, proggish style.
Hope you enjoy, and i would love to hear your opinions as this is one of my more serious attempts!

Led Hed Lefty
04-25-2011, 04:50 PM
****en awesome

joeryer
04-25-2011, 04:55 PM
****en awesome

Thanks a lot mate

hugh20
04-25-2011, 04:57 PM
Bars 81-104 are fantastic. The intro gets a bit repetitive though. I would love to hear this recorded.

joeryer
04-25-2011, 05:01 PM
Bars 81-104 are fantastic. The intro gets a bit repetitive though. I would love to hear this recorded.

I Am known for my long intros, I never found a way to cut that intro down.. so i kept it :P
I like it when the crash cymbal changes to the china, even though having that taken out would have shortened it a bit!

Thank you, I do want to find a band and record all of my stuff one day!

JunKDepot
04-25-2011, 05:16 PM
so, ya like Djent do ya .... gonna listen and then Critique

frankibo
04-25-2011, 05:39 PM
More interesting leads would have helped a lot. A more interesting rhythm would have been a start as well, more off kilter with more notes than just two. The more chordy section was nice. Could have done with a bit more atmosphere, synths, cleans etc.
Clean section now, sounds nice. Very metalcore section, it sounds pretty cool though, so I'll let the generic-ness slide. Rhythm could have done with some progression.
Over all, not bad, bit bland though.