Unfinished Metal

[joeryer]

A sortof mix of styles here, It starts sortof In Flames esque, but then gets to a more rhythmical 'djent' style... I dunno!

Not quite sure about this one, I Like it, but ive never been able to get further than this.

Critique and help would be much appreciated!

[KYmonster]

At the end there if you added a slower chunky sort of breakdown thing and then followed with the main riff and then a face ripper solo...it would be perfect =)