The Wolves (C4C)


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Cookie93
05-01-2011, 05:01 PM
Here's a pretty short, simple 6/8 song I wrote to try and mix my writing up a bit from overly thought out riffs and bridges.

Any comments and crits would be much appreciated :)

Cheers

Chris.

iron_maiden93
05-01-2011, 05:21 PM
I like the bridge section, feels like it floats by too fast though and comes across a little too busy in contrast with the barebones verse. The chorus is nice enough, although personally think it sounds better to have the C# as a minor.

Overall it sounds like the start to a good song, nice work.