Melodic, soon to be, metal (WIP) [GP5/4/Midi]


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08-10-2011, 10:39 PM
I've been trying to twist and turn this piece for some time now, and I just can't get a proper transition into anything. And it's not only the transition that bothers me, I can't seem to come up with anything to put there. I'd like to transition into some distorted-fancy-chord-thingy, but I think that would be even more out of place.
The "Lead"-part used to be right after "More layers", but I dn't know if it should be there.

So my main concern is, what would fit?

08-10-2011, 10:43 PM
Flawless. I don't know if I know how to keep that going; and I'm not touching it with a ten foot pole. Amazing, please continue this.

P.S. - Your mastery of utilizing the blippy-rhodes is unparalleled.

Emperor's Child
08-11-2011, 06:58 AM
That was brilliant to be honest, section by section:
The intro was fantastic, especially with the improvised tempo and sea sounds. Very good soundscaping, if I may say so.

The transistion into the next part was also smoother than I thought it would be looking at the tabs, well done!

The solo section. going into the more layers section was also very nice.

I also tryed playing the song, cutting out the gap from bars 49-59 and thought the transition was perfect.

I honestly have no criticisms, congratulations

C4C would be nice :p: :

08-11-2011, 09:49 AM
The only thing I wasn't fond of was the time signature change. Everything else was fine though