Piano based piece [GP5]

[Juice it baby]

just a piece i wrote a few days ago. dunno if it'll appeal to people on here, judging from the amount of metal songs, but i'd like some feedback on it, thanks.

[GuitarBassVoice]

I like it. Pretty cool. Does it have lyrics yet? If not it should. Nice work nonetheless.

[c0rn1x]

wow very good

[Juice it baby]

I like it. Pretty cool. Does it have lyrics yet? If not it should. Nice work nonetheless.

it does but i haven't worked out the vocal melody yet. thanks guys :)