Standard melodic rock song


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08-17-2011, 04:52 PM
Here's pretty basic song that I think sounds good. Tell me what you think?

08-17-2011, 10:02 PM
This isnt rock more like metalcore... and it's pretty good add some rhythm guitar...

08-17-2011, 11:07 PM
I didn't find it to be very metalcore personally. I thought it was an enjoyable listen, fairly catchy chorus. However, I think sometimes it gets a little repetitive, especially with some of the lead lines, which could be spiced up with slight alterations when there are repeated patterns. I had to adjust the volume of the rhythm guitar & bass as they were too quiet originally, so I would suggest working on the mix a little bit better (although it is just a GP file so it's not a huge deal). All in all, I'd say it's a good song.

If you wouldn't mind, could you check mine out please?