Alternative pop punk rock thing C4C


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08-28-2011, 11:00 PM
Don't mind the singing track; that was supposed to be a little harmony thing. Personally, I think the key change is a little too spontaneous and dramatic. Any tips on that would be great.

guitar ben94
08-30-2011, 03:00 AM
Hey, thanks for the crit on mine.

I can't open gpx files, so could you post a gp4/5 version so I could crit yours back?

08-30-2011, 08:37 PM
No problem bud.

Here ya go

guitar ben94
08-31-2011, 04:35 AM
As a whole, I liked it! The main riff is solid and sounds pretty cool. I really like the chorus-y type thing that starts at 17. Thought it sounds really cool. Other than that, the ending part, starting at bar 62, sounds quite a lot like the verse of Under the Bridge by RHCP to me, so you might want to make a few changes to that, as it sounds very similar, especially with the bass playing what are like the lead parts in between the chords on UtB. Good stuff though :)