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Rossielle
09-16-2011, 09:23 AM
It is a depressive BIack metaI riff , it s0und Iike a Burzum's 0r Xasthur s0ng!

TeII me if y0u Iike this!any idea and crit is accepted!C4C

FacetOfChaos
09-16-2011, 12:04 PM
Not bad. You're definitely improving from what I can tell.

You did get a little bit locked into one single rhythm, especially towards the end. Giving the drums or rhythm guitar a different rhythm than the lead can be interesting. Note choice was decent. Everything was pretty diatonic but I won't complain about that since experimenting with tonality is something that comes later on. It was good that you took one riff and then beefed it up later on when it was repeated in order to keep it feeling more fresh.

Keep it up.