Untitled [RIO, Zappa-like] GP5


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WizMystery
09-16-2011, 06:33 PM
Just starting this one off - it's about a minute and a half. I'm aiming for about 7:30 when finished with a 30-second noise intro.

STONESHAKER
09-16-2011, 07:02 PM
The harmonies that opened this up were really cool... like the use of dissonance in the chords as well as the leads that follow. You create some very eerie, outside sounds during the first section, especially when the lead starts to harmonize in fourths.

In the next section, I'm not sure how well that 9/8 bar flows into that 4/4 bar... personally I would tweak the drums a bit to make it fall into it a little better. The next transition before the xylophones is good though.

The crazy horn instrumental I can't even keep up with, especially that little cut to trill. It's all over the place, but in a good way.

Overall good job, nice to hear something new.

C4C? You might like it.

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1480285

WizMystery
09-16-2011, 07:22 PM
The harmonies that opened this up were really cool... like the use of dissonance in the chords as well as the leads that follow. You create some very eerie, outside sounds during the first section, especially when the lead starts to harmonize in fourths.

In the next section, I'm not sure how well that 9/8 bar flows into that 4/4 bar... personally I would tweak the drums a bit to make it fall into it a little better. The next transition before the xylophones is good though.

The crazy horn instrumental I can't even keep up with, especially that little cut to trill. It's all over the place, but in a good way.

Overall good job, nice to hear something new.

C4C? You might like it.

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1480285

Done and done.