Somewhat progressive rock [GP5]


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10-18-2011, 06:49 PM
whalestory #1

we cool guys. this is song we make. its a good song.

please look through c4c always bro.

EDIT for 1.1: In my defense, it was originally written as D | E7 | A7 | D x2 so when I wrote the melodies I probably thought I hadn't changed it... I think.

10-18-2011, 11:11 PM
I like it man, especially your chord choice. It got kinda repetitive, but that'll be okay with actual vocals and stuff on. The ending seemed kinda weak though. Good job.


10-19-2011, 07:08 AM
It's not bad, just one thing:
4th bar, the guitar plays G and the vocals sing G#. Sounds HORRIBLE, change that note.

10-19-2011, 04:18 PM
So, I liked the intro, nice melody there, although I think I already heard something similar
(But that's okay, 'cause it's nice :D)

Next, the calm part, I think it broke the mood a little, but its okay I guess, but I would keep it fast-paced

Oh, as for the "almost liek blink 184" section, I think it isn't really necessary, it sounds like it's another song... I would cut it off I guess, but it's your choice.

Also, the ending is strange.

Nice song :D