Somewhat progressive rock [GP5]


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Radman_Paiza
10-18-2011, 06:49 PM
whalestory #1

we cool guys. this is song we make. its a good song.

please look through c4c always bro.

EDIT for 1.1: In my defense, it was originally written as D | E7 | A7 | D x2 so when I wrote the melodies I probably thought I hadn't changed it... I think.

CanIbeDanny?
10-18-2011, 11:11 PM
I like it man, especially your chord choice. It got kinda repetitive, but that'll be okay with actual vocals and stuff on. The ending seemed kinda weak though. Good job.

C4C http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1488798

Shaharz
10-19-2011, 07:08 AM
It's not bad, just one thing:
4th bar, the guitar plays G and the vocals sing G#. Sounds HORRIBLE, change that note.

KirkChicoHammet
10-19-2011, 04:18 PM
So, I liked the intro, nice melody there, although I think I already heard something similar
(But that's okay, 'cause it's nice :D)

Next, the calm part, I think it broke the mood a little, but its okay I guess, but I would keep it fast-paced

Oh, as for the "almost liek blink 184" section, I think it isn't really necessary, it sounds like it's another song... I would cut it off I guess, but it's your choice.

Also, the ending is strange.

Nice song :D