progressive rock fun help! [C4C] [GP5]

[dylann]

hey

WHY DO I ALWAYS WRITE 8 BARS OF MUSIC THEN CAN NEVER PROGRESS THE ****ING SONG ANYWAY OMGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

please help me what riff could come after bar 8...... :|

[Shaharz]

A different one.
If you can write one riff, you can write two, I'm pretty sure of it. If you're having a writer's block, that happens, give it time and something will work out

[bazdesh]

I didn't like the bass.. And the drop D.. So i changed it a little.. And added a few chords :D

(I didn't feel the "progrock" in your original, so the rest isn't very progressive neither..)

[dylann]

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