Groovey thing [GP5] [C4C]

[CanIbeDanny?]

Played an ibby 7321 at GC, and it inspired me. Thew together this little groove thing because of it. A couple parts I'm not sure of, but I like the beginning and end. Leave a link and I'll crit back. Thanks!

[KirkChicoHammet]

So, first of all, when I saw the title of this thread I thought it was some funky rock song '-'
I was fooled :D

But anyway, for the crit -

Main groove - I like it, but it sounds a bit strange... I don't know what's bugging me, but I think it could be better.

Dissonance - Good :)

Lame - It really sounded a bit off... I would change this riff.

Emperor's new groove - Nice :), I like it, but I think there's just too much "B's" for one riff...
I don't know, it just tires me a bit hearing that after some time.

The also lame bridge - I didn't like it. And the diminished thingy there just didn't fit it. It just sounded strange...

Heav-E Part - I like the idea, nice groove there.

Grooves blend - It was okay, at first it didn't sound too good, but now I'm used to it :D

Well, sorry for the lame crit
If you want, you can check my thing : http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1489244

[Ultraussie]

Djent.
Pretty good.
The bridge is lame though, lol.