Dead Swans style hardcore song


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AoAXoX
10-28-2011, 08:40 AM
All feedback welcome, cheers.

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Taclite
10-28-2011, 09:24 AM
I found it very boring and repetitive.

CanIbeDanny?
10-28-2011, 02:11 PM
Add a vocal line asap.

NegiTom
10-29-2011, 04:22 PM
More Carpathian than Dead Swans. In fact I don't actually see any Dead Swan influence in that at all. Like Carpathian though, the most boring riffs can turn out cool if you have a good vocalist and great lyrics.

Tster
10-30-2011, 08:03 PM
add a vocal line, how it stands at the moment I find it very bland.