Unfinished Melodic Rock , feedback please? :)


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piratemetalhead
11-02-2011, 06:26 PM
influenced by some japanese rock style, my guitar teachers band (the verse riff is almost ripped off from one of their songs except the harmony... oops ><), and i also ripped off one of my older songs in the breakdown riff XD

but yeah, any feedback would be nice. The only part i want to keep really bad is the main guitar lead lines

KirkChicoHammet
11-02-2011, 07:27 PM
Hey there :)

This is really cool, I'm liking it! I don't listen to much japanese rock bands, but I like some songs (can't name any bands except for Maximum the Hormone, which isn't exactly this style...) and I can sense the "japanese rock feel" in this song :D

Intro - I like it, the drums, the riffs, but I think it's lacking some punch... Maybe you could put some bass here.

Guitar Lead - I really like this! Great melody, I hope you didn't ripped this off any song :D

Verse - Nice riffs, but if you ripped them off another band, you shouldn't keep them... xD,

Breakdown - I usually hate breakdowns, but I found this one rather good :). Bars 39-40 are my favorite :D

Overall, great song, just put some bass in there :)

piratemetalhead
11-11-2011, 04:09 AM
thanks for the feedback, i have finished writing this one as "8 hours ago* and will post it soon :)