90's Emo Piece


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12-06-2011, 01:29 AM
Just a little something I've been working on. Still a work in progress, obviously. I stopped because I didn't have anymore feels at the moment, and I didn't want to force anything.

12-06-2011, 01:56 AM
Did'nt like the "Twinkly Things" solo part

12-06-2011, 01:58 AM
The song wins on the instrument names alone. I like the dynamics of it a lot.

The only part that feels off is the distorted section at the end; the C octave being played feels odd. Maybe its just me, but it feels like it doesn't fit that well.

12-20-2011, 06:51 AM
i...like....twinkly..stuff, it really flows and everything fits there perfectly.

i really like twinkly stuff but i've never wrote a "twinkly emo" song, really liked this one

12-24-2011, 03:55 PM
I like what you've got so far. My suggestion would be, although maybe not immediately, to use the intro arpeggios on the overdriven guitar. Other than that, I don't have much to say; nice work.

C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1413914