I need help :( [Metalcore/hardcore]


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KillingTM
12-07-2011, 11:19 PM
I've started a pretty good project so far, and I'm proud of it, but after bar 53 I feel that the song goes in a completely different direction and I'm not so sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing.

and I kind of feel like the drums are kind of bland and uninteresting.

Could someone help me out with this ?!

billytalent77
12-07-2011, 11:38 PM
i actually like the direction it takes, it's more interesting musically. it could be a cool lead in to a solo because it's more melodic.

dylann
12-07-2011, 11:49 PM
i agree. it sounds fine to me.

ShiftedSoul
12-11-2011, 08:40 AM
This sounds pretty good but I think at bar 69 you should harmonize the lead!

touke
12-12-2011, 05:03 AM
I'm not liking the drums. I'm not a drummer though, and I can't really think of how to better them. The guitar parts are generic, but a lot of "metalcore" is from what I've heard so I guess that isn't really a problem. Overall it's legit in terms of arrangement but really I feel like 10+ different bands have already written this. Just work on being more original

If you want to c4c,
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1503362