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xxsongwriter
10-04-2005, 06:23 PM
You laugh at her jokes,
Even though I told them first.
You look at her the way I look at you,
this makes everything worse.
When you?re around her you try to act tough.
And I know in my heart I?ll never be good enough.

Chorus
I miss you - when you?re not around.
But baby when you're there to catch me,
I?ll never hit the ground.
I know it sounds so easy,
but it?s just a fantasy.


When you?re around I can?t help but smile.
Will you talk to me just for a while?
It?ll brighten my day, If you decide to stay.
I know you don?t realize how I feel.
So I?ll never really know if these emotions are real.

Chorus
I miss you - when you?re not around.
But baby when you're there to catch me,
I?ll never hit the ground.
I know it sounds so easy,
but it?s just a fantasy.


I hope you notice how I stare,
I bet you do but you don?t care.
So won?t you listen to what I say?
We?ll see if it ends up my way.

jimmyjimjim
10-04-2005, 06:47 PM
its sounds like an emo song, but its good if you want to go in that direction. actually, its pretty good anyways. dont make it an emo song though, so dont scream any of it. yeah, good work.

guitarguy5515
10-04-2005, 07:00 PM
post this in songwriting and lyrics!!!!

xxsongwriter
10-04-2005, 07:56 PM
sorry will do review it there please!

Lilee_Relvis
10-08-2005, 03:13 PM
Think you could give us some chords?

legions
10-11-2005, 05:39 PM
uhm wrong thread d00d

xxsongwriter
11-25-2005, 11:52 PM
i'm working on the chords.
i know it's inthe wrong thread i reposted it in the songwriting one.

182bitterstarts
11-26-2005, 12:31 AM
the first line in the chorus is taken from a simple plan song but other than that its pretty good

xxsongwriter
11-26-2005, 12:20 PM
it is? i didnt know that.

Hardin
11-26-2005, 02:08 PM
"You look at her the way I look at you"

Is she gay? OR are you?

xxsongwriter
11-26-2005, 06:25 PM
Um no? it means he looks at another girl the way i look at him.