Freedom Speaks Solo - fast (please crit)


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Kill'Em'All89
11-01-2005, 06:54 AM
FREEDOM SPEAKS SOLO - HELBERNINE
(select letters and drag for complete solo)

E|--------------------------------------------------------|
B|------15------181715----------15------------------17----|
G|141414--141414------------14------14----------15------15|
D|--------------------141414--14--14--1414151515--15--15--|
A|--------------------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------------|

E|----------------------| |
B|----------------------| |
G|----------14--151412--| X2 |
D|1212121212--12------15| |
A|----------------------| |
E|----------------------| |

E|---------------------------------------------------------|
B|------15------15b(17)r15~14h15p14--14--------------------|
G|141414--141414-------------------15--15-14h15p14-12h14p12|
D|---------------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------|

E|-----------------------------------------------------|
B|-------------------------------------------13--------|
G|--12-------------------------------12h14h15--15p14p12|
D|15--15p1414h15~14h15p14p12~12h14h15------------------|
A|-----------------------------------------------------|
E|-----------------------------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------14b(16)r14~-----------14h15h17-14h15h17|
G|14h15p14-12h14p12--12-----------14b(16)r14~-----------------|
D|-----------------15-----------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------------------|
E|------------------------------------------------------------|

E|-----------------------------------------------------------|
B|15h17h18-17-15h17p15-17h18p1715h17p1514h15p14--14----------|
G|---------------------------------------------15--1514h15p14|
D|-----------------------------------------------------------|
A|-----------------------------------------------------------|
E|-----------------------------------------------------------|

E|-------------------------------xx~~|
B|-------------------------------15~~|
G|12h14p12--12---------------xxxxxx~~|
D|--------15--15p14p12h14p12~xxxx12~~|
A|---------------------------xxxxxx~~|
E|---------------------------xxxx10~~|


Played very fast, post recording soon,
A bit advanced
Please crit, good or bad,

stoubora
11-01-2005, 07:48 AM
Looks ok, based around a blues pentatonic so I guess your going for a Kirk Hammet type solo metal blues solo, a bit of variation using different scales wouldn't go amiss. Maybe whammy a few of those high 17s. I like the muting at the end with the 3 note chord with muted strings in between thats kewl, its almost a Cadd9 type chord isn't it?

acrocks
11-01-2005, 12:18 PM
ok first things first, stick by the rules, you can only post a maximum of 2 riffs in one week, doesn't matter if you didn't know that, you do now

definitly like this one a lot more than your other solo favourite part was the hammer ons on the fourth line it is pretty sweet. One thing is that on the first line, the 17 on he b string sounded a bit off, maybe you play that a semi tone higher.

i would definitly like to hear a recording check out mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=276457

benjaminr
11-11-2005, 01:29 AM
i don't see how you would consider that advanced.

Kill'Em'All89
11-20-2005, 05:07 AM
well considering its played at 200 bpm, i think it is a little on the xtreme side