[POWERTAB] echoes


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Grovermans
11-01-2005, 06:02 PM
acousticness.

lyrics (http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=4350787)

guitarbreaker
11-01-2005, 06:21 PM
I like it but repeats too many times in the verse.

Grovermans
11-01-2005, 06:24 PM
it has to repeat that many times for the lyrics.

Murahilin
11-01-2005, 07:05 PM
Sounds too repetitive

Grovermans
11-01-2005, 07:07 PM
i can't make it less repetetive.
the lyrics need to fit in.

gutsman
11-01-2005, 07:43 PM
you can try adding some varations at some points to make it more diverse

Grovermans
11-01-2005, 07:58 PM
i guess, but i want to keep it simple
and just have one guitar
so it's really easy to record.

guitarbreaker
11-01-2005, 09:14 PM
Okay then make some varitions on the chords thats all.

Retribution
11-01-2005, 10:22 PM
I don't know if you can make it in a different format somehow, but I'd love to hear it(as I love the lyrics), but powertab's never worked for me.

Grovermans
11-01-2005, 10:23 PM
i'll prolly end up recording it.

lEcheloNl
11-02-2005, 12:17 AM
it has to repeat that many times for the lyrics.
no it doesnt.

Grovermans
11-02-2005, 07:42 AM
...

yes.

it does.

i don't think you would know...

PsychoFreak
11-02-2005, 12:42 PM
Rofl guys, it is HIS song, you can't tell him what sounds right and not....

Grovermans
11-02-2005, 02:35 PM
well they're not telling me what sounds right.

they're telling me that the lyrics
would fit in perfectly,
when they have no idea
how or where they fit in.

gutsman
11-02-2005, 02:37 PM
well next time post it with the lyrics in mp3 so that we CAN give usefull comments ey ;)

Grovermans
11-02-2005, 02:42 PM
i'd have to record it to do that,
and that's a helluva lot more work,
in case you didn't know that.

Grovermans
11-02-2005, 06:54 PM
edited it.

i added another guitar.

Egrodyne
11-04-2005, 09:30 AM
Not bad, i like it
possibly you could cut verse 2 in half,
this is a trate used to grap the attention back because...
they weren't expeting,
it as quick as the first time,
round

...god u have a werid way of writting things,
govermans ;)

Grovermans
11-04-2005, 10:25 AM
i can't cut the second verse in half.
i don't know what you guys don't understand about this,
but the lyrics need to fit in and they just fit in as it is.

Egrodyne
11-04-2005, 02:10 PM
i dont see why you cant split the stanza's up a bit....imagen each verse had 2 sections which were x 2 repeat, repective...

the first verse would have both sections....
..then chours
then half a verse
chours...that interlude....verse 3 which is the second half of your verse 2...then that outro..

....that would be pretty cool

Grovermans
11-04-2005, 02:13 PM
it just doesn't work like that...

the verses were each written
to be almost exactly the same,
but with different subjects
and different ideas, but
the wording was the same.

so the verses have to be the same length
in order to get the right effect.

Egrodyne
11-04-2005, 02:25 PM
it just doesn't work like that...

the verses were each written
to be almost exactly the same,
but with different subjects
and different ideas, but
the wording was the same.

so the verses have to be the same length
in order to get the right effect.

just seems forumulated and clinched not to mention boring after the 3rd repeat.........

Grovermans
11-04-2005, 02:29 PM
you mean "cliched" not "clinched" right?
cuz if you don't i have no clue wtf you're saying.

and most of my songs seem kinda boring
until i actually add the lyrics to them.
i write the lyrics first and then write music to them,
so basically, any music i write has to be repeated like that
unless it's an instrumental piece or there are no lyrics yet.

Egrodyne
11-04-2005, 02:33 PM
you mean "cliched" not "clinched" right?
cuz if you don't i have no clue wtf you're saying.

and most of my songs seem kinda boring
until i actually add the lyrics to them.
i write the lyrics first and then write music to them,
so basically, any music i write has to be repeated like that
unless it's an instrumental piece or there are no lyrics yet.

...So ur an emo bob dylan? interesting :)

piratepirate
11-07-2005, 03:55 PM
I'm going to basically agree with what most people said, except I'll take your side and say that the lyrics fit in the way they are, and with proper vocals, the monotony would be completely relieved.

The lead guitar also adds a nice touch.