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phpn00bf4life
11-04-2005, 12:31 AM
Crit For Crit


Intro:
Bass:
g:9---9---9---------------------------
d:--7---9---7-9-7---------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------


Rythem Guitar Hops In:
E(x4)
Bass:
g:9---9---9---9-----------------------
d:--7---7---7---7---------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------
Am(x4)
Bass:
g:------------------------------------
d:7-9-7-9-----------------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------
C#(x2)
g:9---9-------------------------------
d:--9---9-----------------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------

!~~--------GUITAR 1 RIFFS--------~~!

Verse:
E Am Bm
e:------------------|------------------|------------------
b:--7----5----------|------------------|------------------
g:9---7-------------|--5---------------|----7-------------
d:------------------|7---5-5-9---------|-9----7-7-9-------
a:------------------|------------------|------------------
e:------------------|------------------|------------------

Chorus:
E Am Bm C#
e:------------------|------------------|------------------|--------------------
b:----7-5-7-5-------|------------------|------------------|--------------------
g:--4---------------|------------------|------------------|--------------------
d:2-----------------|------------------|---6-9------------|11----9-8-9-8-6-----
a:------------------|---7--------------|-4----------------|---11---------------
e:------------------|-5----------------|------------------|--------------------

!~~--------END GUITAR 1 RIFFS--------~~!

!~~--------BASS RIFFS--------~~!

C# Am Bm E
g:|9----|----|--7-|9---|
d:|--9--|7-9-|9---|--7-|
a:|-----|----|----|----|
e:|-----|----|----|----|

!~~--------END BASS RIFFS--------~~!


E
When school is done,
Am
I'm just gonna have fun,
Bm
Me with you tonight
E
It's so alright
Am
Let's hold true to love [ -- Hold Love till 6th syallable-- ]
Bm
With the summer above

E
Can't wait for summer days now
C#
Hold on too me as we go
Am Bm
We'll drive, we'll drive away

E
My klick and I
Am
Don't know why
Bm
I see me and you
E
Holding hands being true
Am
I can't wait for summer to come
Bm
I hope it last too long
Full Band: Ohhhhh

E
Can't wait for summer days now
C#
Hold on too me as we go
Am Bm
We'll drive, we'll drive away



Outro:

We'll drive so far

We'll drive so far (Full band comes in after 2nd time, repeat to fade)


It's got lyrics mixed into! I'd like to know what you think?

HazeD
11-04-2005, 12:36 AM
id have to hear it, i have no idea what your flow is. you didnt add a tempo. sorry man, nice tabbing thou

HazeD
11-04-2005, 12:37 AM
from what im seeing, your not matchin your notes. the verse when in the key of E, what ur playing isnt in E it goes from A to D 4x.

phpn00bf4life
11-04-2005, 12:47 AM
HuH.

K no0b question:

What would be in the key of E? Help explain how to determine what is in key of a certain note? I tried to stay in key but I guess I didn't.

HazeD
11-04-2005, 12:52 AM
its aight man, i hope it doesnt sound like im coming down on you lol. there are scales you should learn to stay in key. see your 1st part thats in E 4x. the notes your playing arent going to match the E ur rhthm guitar plays. just goto google or yahoo and type bass scales, and find a scale that u feel comfortable with and check out the key of e

phpn00bf4life
11-04-2005, 12:54 AM
Okay thanks!

S2-GreenDay-S2
11-06-2005, 09:41 PM
The lyrics suck, but the guitar part is okay.