[Power Tab] Desperation


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11-08-2005, 02:06 AM
my first time submitting something here.....please crit mine and ill crit yours if you leave a link..thanks :peace:

11-08-2005, 04:04 AM
It made no sense to me...

11-08-2005, 05:53 AM
that was just wacky... the consctruction was really weird and the solo (besides from having unlogical repeatings) felt like it had some notes of.

the last part had some potential though, keep trying and check out tabs from professional bands on guide lines to improve your song :)

11-08-2005, 09:58 AM
A little strange try to stay in same scale more then it would sound better. Check out mine.Mine (http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=276996) Midi anyone can listen to on the computer.

11-08-2005, 11:33 AM
0.0 what the hell were you on when you wrote this?

It's possibly the most wreched thing I've ever had the misfortune of passing through my ears.

I think I'm going to cry ;.;

11-08-2005, 04:26 PM
I always say, just because u can play alot of notes fast, it doesn't mean ur playing its good. everything was too disorganized and it didn't have the ability to carry a tune. maybe check mine, http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=278758
its real simple but somewhat catchy

11-08-2005, 05:45 PM
that was painful to the ears

11-08-2005, 05:48 PM
learn some theory.

11-08-2005, 09:16 PM
ok...just so u all no it was meant to be retarded and weird

11-08-2005, 09:31 PM

nice try.

it's still horrible.
there's a such thing as
organized chaos, and this
was NOT organized at all.
it was just complete chaos.

11-08-2005, 09:59 PM
that was the exact point of it...to have no point..if that made sense......me and my band wanted to something weird..were retarded like that

11-08-2005, 10:34 PM
you can still be weird in a way
that sounds somewhat organized.
listen to a lot of hardcore stuff
and you'll see what i mean.

11-08-2005, 10:51 PM
i do listen to hardcore..but the point of the song was we WANTED it to be retarded and random

11-11-2005, 03:44 PM
complete chaos in a not good way.

11-11-2005, 04:39 PM
i do listen to hardcore..but the point of the song was we WANTED it to be retarded and random

....Yeah ok fair enough, doesn't make up for the fact its ****e though does it :no:

11-11-2005, 05:06 PM
lol no it doesnt

11-11-2005, 07:20 PM
too random... sry

11-15-2005, 04:17 PM
its either pure progressive genius (and trust me, i wouldnt know) or a bowl full of sh1t essentially! lol but yea, i got the feeling it was purposefully pants (i.e. your retardness)

ethereal sin
11-16-2005, 12:55 PM

Dude and I thought the stuff I wrote was bad..but this is just....woah..

The repeats sound horrible, the riffs are just...out there, not in a good way...
How did you even make this? Did you just open up powertab and then start beating your keyboard? Sorry dude but this was AWFUL.

Better luck next time...