[Power Tab] Desperation


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hammett_slash89
11-08-2005, 02:06 AM
my first time submitting something here.....please crit mine and ill crit yours if you leave a link..thanks :peace:

Murahilin
11-08-2005, 04:04 AM
It made no sense to me...

gutsman
11-08-2005, 05:53 AM
that was just wacky... the consctruction was really weird and the solo (besides from having unlogical repeatings) felt like it had some notes of.

the last part had some potential though, keep trying and check out tabs from professional bands on guide lines to improve your song :)

guitarbreaker
11-08-2005, 09:58 AM
A little strange try to stay in same scale more then it would sound better. Check out mine.Mine (http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=276996) Midi anyone can listen to on the computer.

piratepirate
11-08-2005, 11:33 AM
0.0 what the hell were you on when you wrote this?


It's possibly the most wreched thing I've ever had the misfortune of passing through my ears.

I think I'm going to cry ;.;

Philosopher1989
11-08-2005, 04:26 PM
I always say, just because u can play alot of notes fast, it doesn't mean ur playing its good. everything was too disorganized and it didn't have the ability to carry a tune. maybe check mine, http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=278758
its real simple but somewhat catchy

Pure_Morning
11-08-2005, 05:45 PM
that was painful to the ears

Grovermans
11-08-2005, 05:48 PM
learn some theory.

hammett_slash89
11-08-2005, 09:16 PM
ok...just so u all no it was meant to be retarded and weird

Grovermans
11-08-2005, 09:31 PM
...

nice try.

it's still horrible.
there's a such thing as
organized chaos, and this
was NOT organized at all.
it was just complete chaos.

hammett_slash89
11-08-2005, 09:59 PM
that was the exact point of it...to have no point..if that made sense......me and my band wanted to something weird..were retarded like that

Grovermans
11-08-2005, 10:34 PM
you can still be weird in a way
that sounds somewhat organized.
listen to a lot of hardcore stuff
and you'll see what i mean.

hammett_slash89
11-08-2005, 10:51 PM
i do listen to hardcore..but the point of the song was we WANTED it to be retarded and random

DarkSonata
11-11-2005, 03:44 PM
complete chaos in a not good way.

Egrodyne
11-11-2005, 04:39 PM
i do listen to hardcore..but the point of the song was we WANTED it to be retarded and random

....Yeah ok fair enough, doesn't make up for the fact its ****e though does it :no:

hammett_slash89
11-11-2005, 05:06 PM
lol no it doesnt

flyingjew34
11-11-2005, 07:20 PM
too random... sry

FATa|
11-15-2005, 04:17 PM
its either pure progressive genius (and trust me, i wouldnt know) or a bowl full of sh1t essentially! lol but yea, i got the feeling it was purposefully pants (i.e. your retardness)

ethereal sin
11-16-2005, 12:55 PM
O.O

Dude and I thought the stuff I wrote was bad..but this is just....woah..

The repeats sound horrible, the riffs are just...out there, not in a good way...
How did you even make this? Did you just open up powertab and then start beating your keyboard? Sorry dude but this was AWFUL.

Better luck next time...