[POWERTAB] peacock quills


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11-13-2005, 10:27 PM
kinda weird. idk.

lyrics (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=280308)

11-13-2005, 10:44 PM
The whole thing is a bit repeated. I really like the second half, just try to come up with some more melodic lines, take out some repeats, and add a new part to make up for the loss of the reapeats.

11-13-2005, 10:53 PM
i liked it man. good job.

11-14-2005, 01:16 PM
I loved it. I got bored of the repeats around the 4 minute mark though. Add more melody lines prehaps?

11-14-2005, 01:18 PM
oops i forgot to update it.

i edited it a bit.

11-14-2005, 06:34 PM
I was blown away by the lead parts.

completely blown away. wow.

Really nice work here. I'd love to hear a recording.

11-15-2005, 10:02 PM

11-16-2005, 08:06 PM
Loved it. Absolutely loved it.

My only idea would be...

At staff 58, take out the rhythm guitar and just let the two leads play. I think it adds a sort of dramatic effect after the 3x repeat.

Overall, great.

11-17-2005, 08:08 PM
hollyyy ****tt... this is just incredible, still got the classic mainstream styles alot, but i liek it regardless of my anitpop attitudes

11-17-2005, 11:04 PM
awesome distorted parts. The beginning takes too long - but as it's a long progressive song with decent lyrics, I would expect a lot from it if you recorded it. Good stuff. I don't find it weird - it's really to my liking. Make another piece towards that direction - it's good.

11-18-2005, 06:43 PM
like most of it except bars 9-16, the chords just dont flow...i had a wee tinker around that area, but if u dont like what i surgested no worrys :) .....im not even sure about the changes i made myself lol