eerie Riff ( I think )


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11-14-2005, 12:57 PM
im currently writin an instrumental thats heavily inspired by a movie i saw about a WWI Soldier who comes home from the war, and then 20 some years later, goes into WWII, Cant remember the name though..old 40s movie, but i want an intro thats kinda of like.....eerie forthcoming feel, like **** isnt gonna go right, just wanna know if this riff catches that kinda feel, its experimental, so cut me some slack here, usually i right well, just really fast ****, tryin' something new now, evenetually i'll post the solo for this song, but that might take a while

Clean Guitar (---)This part is kinda of a questionable part of the riff

11-14-2005, 01:03 PM
i like it at first i thought that second chord was disgusting but its grown on me in the past few minutes

11-14-2005, 01:06 PM
the second chord sounds disgusting because a B natural is played in the first chord and a B flat is played in the second chord. other than that, i liked it. i think it conveys that eerie feeling you're looking for.

11-14-2005, 01:07 PM
i see your point, i think i know what i can do to fix that

11-14-2005, 01:08 PM
any suggestions for a replacement for the second chord

11-14-2005, 01:13 PM
go one more down to an A

11-14-2005, 01:15 PM
how ironic ^^ " i right well" lol ^_^