[POWERTAB] bulimic ivory


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Grovermans
11-16-2005, 12:13 AM
i screwed around with time signatures.
i think it turned out pretty cool.

BULIMIC IVORY

composers swallow phoenix feathers
and vomit up ash.
let's snort it like technicolour
lines of cocaine that spell out
anti-drug sentiments.
we're such a fucking contradiction,
so we act like we don't care
that these bulimic piano keys
just threw up melted ivory on our graves.
we act like we don't want to be remembered.
like we just want to be missed.
we're such a fucking contradiction,
so we slit our throats with safety scissors.

Alfi_d
11-16-2005, 12:53 AM
i love it i love it

piratepirate
11-16-2005, 03:35 PM
wow. impressive use of changing time signatures. A lot of times when time signatures change every few measures or so it sounds forced and awkward, but your piece does it perfectly.

HumanitysDeath
11-16-2005, 07:57 PM
Dont really like this piece...

It sounds like it wants to be melodic but crazy at the same time. And it tries that, and it doesn't go too well.

Yea.. Not your best, IMO

flyingjew34
11-16-2005, 11:59 PM
a bit random, but i like most of the riffs very well. the lyrics are a bit brutal though

culex-knight
11-17-2005, 03:10 PM
Very Opeth sounding IMO.

Spark1284
11-17-2005, 07:59 PM
for one whoever said this sounded like opeth is a moron... but regardless, im not a big fan of this mainstream quasi-hardcore stuff but i was very impressed with it, the signature changes worked really really well, and above all it just had some plain old good riffage going on, good work.

mangablade
11-18-2005, 09:47 AM
sounds like something you spewed out in 20 minutes with the thought of "im going to be original, but im gonna do it quick and half assed"

Grovermans
11-18-2005, 10:32 AM
it took me about 3 hours...

culex-knight
11-18-2005, 04:32 PM
for one whoever said this sounded like opeth is a moron... but regardless, im not a big fan of this mainstream quasi-hardcore stuff but i was very impressed with it, the signature changes worked really really well, and above all it just had some plain old good riffage going on, good work.


Says O Lord Spark1284 who thinks "Slayer Rox".

Shut the hell up.