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VigilantPost
11-16-2005, 04:59 PM
I've had this little thing down for a while now, and I'm not sure what to do with it. It reminds me of a scene of two friends parting ways, and one of them being shown walking down a wooded path. I don't know, that's just me.

line it up better by putting it in Notepad

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Any comments or suggestions are greatly appreciated!

evvo_gc_fan
11-16-2005, 06:32 PM
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Any comments or suggestions are greatly appreciated!

thank me later for that.

EDIT: right, after arranging it, i like what i see and hear. you are playing a C, Am, C, Am progression there, and the notes added on the B sound very good. the notes you are adding B (open) C (1st fret) and D (3rd fret). you could use some of these chords in some way for a bridge or chorus. your notes for the Aminor pentatonic are A, C, D, F and G. mess around using these chords, and do what you want. sevenths, minors, diminished. go wild. id like to hear the end result, because the start is good.

VigilantPost
11-17-2005, 02:45 AM
Cool, thanks for the pointers. I've never been good at bridges, transitions or anything of the like. I think I might have a phobia of turning to chords when I'm playing a fingering melody; but, here's what I have come up with. It is 'meh', at best, I think.

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evvo_gc_fan
11-17-2005, 12:24 PM
thats a nice, simple expansion. G, F and D are good together. keep going!!

S2-GreenDay-S2
11-19-2005, 12:45 PM
Its good, but not great. Too repetetive.

WishIHadAGibson
11-19-2005, 02:19 PM
yah its basic, but the idea is there. thatll be a good 10 second bridge, perhaps.

i agree, go wild with some more odd chords and add some more transitions between them.

groove
11-20-2005, 08:22 AM
its reminds me of.." street spirit " or "dust in the wind "