Something I wrote last night.


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YSM404
11-30-2005, 09:23 PM
Heres something I made just messing around last night. I like the way it turned out. Tempo is like...medium to moderate?


e--------------------------------------------
b--------------------------------------------
g-------------44-------444--------4----------
d-----------4----4---4-----4----4------------
a-------22---------2---------22--------------
E---0-0--------------------------------------

e--------------------------------------------
b-----44444-----4444----44444----------------
g---4-44444--44-4444--4-44444----------------
d---4-44444--44-4444--4-44444----------------
a---2--------22-------2----------------------
E---0--------00-------0----------------------

e--------------------------------------------
b--------------------------------------------
g-----22---2---2-----------------------------
d---2----2---2---22--------------------------
a--------------------------------------------
E--------------------------------------------

e--------------------------------------------
b-----44444-----4444----22222----22222-------
g---4-44444--44-4444--2-22222--2-22222-------
d---4-44444--44-4444--2-22222--2-22222-------
a---2--------22-------0--------0-------------
E---0--------00-------0--------0-------------


some Crit would be pretty rad, and appreciated.
I'll crit back...but I broke two strings since I wrote this, the high E and the D. Maybe after I get out to the shop.

Its really simple....I know, but I like the sound.

hthedinga
11-30-2005, 09:49 PM
Yeah, I like the sound of the chords on the last section. The third section seems pretty worthless though. I don't know about that first section either. Maybe it would sound better if I knew the rhythm.

I'm thinking you might like this:
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=288058

YSM404
11-30-2005, 10:44 PM
Thanks.
hm, I'll try and record it tommarow to give you a feel for it.

yea....the thrid section is just kinda a fill. Maybe if I through it as a short lead with some chords as rhythm.

I'll try out yours tommarow as well, too late to be playing guitar tonight.

YSM404
12-04-2005, 05:45 PM
Ok, I recorded it on my acustic.
If you want to take a listen.

Random Riff 01
http://kyuditsky.dmusic.com

hthedinga
12-04-2005, 10:08 PM
Pretty spiffy. If anything I'd say try to follow a set rhythm structure, such as having 4 beat per measure. Nice work.