[Tab] My first song :P

[GiantRaven]

I was going for a hardcore/metalcore approach i suppose...

168bpm

Intro

Guitar 1+2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X2
A|000-101210000-8108000-575000-787------------------------------------
D|000-------000-----000----000----------------------------------------
pm::: ::: ::: :::

Guitar 1+2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X1
A|000-101210000-575000-353000-010-------------------------------------
D|000-------000----000----000-----------------------------------------
pm::: ::: ::: :::

Guitar 1+2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X1
A|000-101210000-8108000-575000-787------------------------------------
D|000-------000-----000----000----------------------------------------
pm::: ::: ::: :::

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X4
A|000-101210000-8108000-575000-787------------------------------------
D|000-------000-----000----000----------------------------------------
pm::: ::: ::: :::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|----121412----101210----797----9109---------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X4
A|000-------000-------000----000--------------------------------------
D|000-------000-------000----000--------------------------------------
pm::: ::: ::: :::


Verse

Guitar 1+2
e|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
G|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------X2
A|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X2
A|00001012100000810800005750000787------------------------------------
D|0000------0000----0000---0000---------------------------------------
pm:::: :::: :::: ::::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|----121412----101210----797----9109---------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X2
A|0000------0000------0000---0000--------------------------------------
D|0000------0000------0000---0000--------------------------------------
pm:::: :::: :::: ::::


Chorus

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----X2
A|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----
D|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----
pm:::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----X2
A|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----
D|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----


Verse

Guitar 1+2
e|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
G|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------X1
A|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------


Interlude?

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------1010109-----------------------
A|---12-10--12-10--81087--12-10--12-10--------------------------------
D|-00--0--00--0--00-----00--0--00--0--00------------------------------
pm :: : :: : :: :: : :: : ::
X2
Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|----------------------------------------13131312--------------------
G|---14-12--14-12--1012109--14-12--14-12------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------
A|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|-00--0--00--0--00-------00--0--00--0--00----------------------------
pm :: : :: : :: :: : :: : ::


Intro bit again...

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X2
A|00001012100000810800005750000787------------------------------------
D|0000------0000----0000---0000---------------------------------------
pm:::: :::: :::: ::::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|----121412----101210----797----9109---------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X2
A|0000------0000------0000---0000--------------------------------------
D|0000------0000------0000---0000--------------------------------------
pm:::: :::: :::: ::::


Verse


Guitar 1+2 (all downstrokes)
e|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
G|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------X1
A|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------


Chorus

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----X1
A|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----
D|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----
pm:::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----X1
A|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----
D|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----

Outro


Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X4
A|00001012100000810800005750000787------------------------------------
D|0000------0000----0000---0000---------------------------------------
pm:::: :::: :::: ::::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|----121412----101210----797----9109---------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X4
A|0000------0000------0000---0000-------------------------------------
D|0000------0000------0000---0000-------------------------------------
pm:::: :::: :::: ::::

[piquet]

Nice and menacing. At first, I played it on my acoustic, which was ... meh. Then, I tried it on my 'lectric with the gain all the way up, and it rocked...

[*'-'*]

I am of the opinion that this will sound good, but im to lazy to drop to d to check it out. And the interlude look familiar?

[GiantRaven]

I dont know, i made it up out of the blue. The only thing that it is loosely based on is Unholy Confessions by Avenged Sevenfold

[Matt_Malmsteen]

Nice, I can play it because I'm lead guitarist for our band :p:
But never the less it is good, could use a solo though, get writing!!

[GiantRaven]

Nice, I can play it because I'm lead guitarist for our band :p:
But never the less it is good, could use a solo though, get writing!!

:peace:

You've yet to proove to me you can play it

...and write your own damn solo :p:

[Horvat]

Good, but you should do more with the straight power chords in the verse to make it more interesting. I suggest adding some tiny lead breaks, just for a second or two, between some of the chord changes. Just like a quick pentatnoic lick or something.

[*'-'*]

Ah Ha. The interlude looked similar to the verse riff of like light to the flies by trivium. But it siunds dif

[master ed]

its ok..again i will say..pretty basic and looks like some other song i no...definitely need a solo...its ok but i dont think it will go anywhere without some serious long hours of work..sorry to be hard dude

[GiantRaven]

its ok..again i will say..pretty basic and looks like some other song i no...definitely need a solo...its ok but i dont think it will go anywhere without some serious long hours of work..sorry to be hard dude

S'ok, might inspire me to actually do some work :p:

Shame i don't have the musical ability to improve >_<

[GiantRaven]

Ok, these are some other little bits that i came up with and may try and fit in with the rest of the song. Any good?

e|13------13------13------13------12------12------12------12------
B|--161413--161413--161413--161413--151312--151312--151312--151312
G|----------------------------------------------------------------
D|----------------------------------------------------------------
A|----------------------------------------------------------------
D|----------------------------------------------------------------

e|10------10------------------------------------------------------
B|--131110--13111013------13------11------10----------------------
G|------------------151312--151312--131110--121091210-------------
D|---------------------------------------------------1312~--------
A|----------------------------------------------------------------
D|----------------------------------------------------------------

Git1
e|------------------------------------------------------------------------
B|------------------------------------------------------------------------
G|------------------------------------------------101010101010101099999999
D|000000005555555588888888333333330000000055555555101010101010101099999999x1
A|0000000055555555888888883333333300000000555555558-8-8-8-8-8-8-8-77777777
D|000000005555555588888888333333330000000055555555------------------------

Git2
e|----------------------------------------------------------------
B|----------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------23------------------------------23----------------
D|22222222333355--222222223333552022222222333355--2222222233335520X1
A|----------------------------------------------------------------
D|----------------------------------------------------------------
pm::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

Git1
e|------------------------------------------------------------------------
B|------------------------------------------------------------------------
G|------------------------------------------------101010109999121212127777
D|000000005555555588888888333333330000000055555555101010109999121212127777x1
A|0000000055555555888888883333333300000000555555558-8-8-8-7777101010105555
D|000000005555555588888888333333330000000055555555------------------------

Git2
e|----------------------------------------------------------------
B|----------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------56------------------------------56----------------
D|55555555777788--555555557777885-55555555777788--555555557777885-x2
A|-------------------------------8-------------------------------8
D|----------------------------------------------------------------

[We_Wont_Die]

The verse looks suspiciously and sounds suspiciously like 'Alive' by P.O.D.
Speaking of which, does that stand for Payable On Death?

[Bacio]

At first glance, it looks simple and uninspired. I have to say though, it sounds much better than it looks, even if you're using a crappy 5watt training amp.

[GiantRaven]

The verse looks suspiciously and sounds suspiciously like 'Alive' by P.O.D.
Speaking of which, does that stand for Payable On Death?


:haha So it does, purely coincedental i tell ye!

That is what it stands for

[Rock-god]

Nice. :peace:

[Ramoon]

Total pwnage! :satan: but ermm...do you have to fit in the two tabs added later on by your own feeling or do you have any suggestions on how to make the song more succesful? Anyways as I said: Total pwnage! keep up the good work!

[GiantRaven]

HAHA Thanks! :cheers:

[ourlastday]

awesome

[GiantRaven]

This is part of the bass tab I wrote:

g|---------------------------------
d|---------------------------------
a|----------------------787--------
D|0000353255557875888810---33332020

Theres more to it but i'll put that up later