thembones vs. lopsided_cow


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01-17-2006, 07:11 PM
lopsided_cow's piece

Holding on no more,
No more

Running away can hardly breathe.
It?s not enough, and now I see,
All this time I?ve been holding
On to the life that they?ve been molding.

Holding on no more,
No more

Now it?s not for me to see -
The silent night, it beckons me
To become part of endless bays
And tear to shreds the equal ways.

Holding on no more,
No more,
No more?
thembones16's piece
"society's in the ****-hole"

what to say
time erosions
conclude the day
administer and cease
this pain
society is raped and hopeless
we will miss it
it will never ever
be the same

fu*k crooked leaders
who tell you
what to say
blindfold you
and lead you
in the "so-called" way

its all just fu*king insane
society's in the sh*t-hole
and we know just who to blame

all is lost
what to find?
just apologize and pray another time

01-17-2006, 08:42 PM
okay the comps ready

01-18-2006, 09:37 AM
meh didn't really like either, but #1 at a push

01-18-2006, 04:47 PM
number twoo, but like jallas said, it's a push.

01-19-2006, 06:16 AM
number 2

01-19-2006, 12:59 PM
thanks bassgaz

01-19-2006, 01:20 PM

01-20-2006, 02:17 AM
2, "by a push" as the rest of you have put it...

08-14-2006, 08:48 PM
No You All Suck|
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