thembones vs. lopsided_cow


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thembones16
01-17-2006, 07:11 PM
lopsided_cow's piece
"Torn"

Holding on no more,
No more

Running away can hardly breathe.
It?s not enough, and now I see,
All this time I?ve been holding
On to the life that they?ve been molding.

Holding on no more,
No more

Now it?s not for me to see -
The silent night, it beckons me
To become part of endless bays
And tear to shreds the equal ways.

Holding on no more,
No more,
No more?
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thembones16's piece
"society's in the ****-hole"

what to say
time erosions
conclude the day
administer and cease
this pain
society is raped and hopeless
we will miss it
it will never ever
be the same

fu*k crooked leaders
who tell you
what to say
blindfold you
and lead you
in the "so-called" way

its all just fu*king insane
society's in the sh*t-hole
and we know just who to blame

all is lost
what to find?
just apologize and pray another time

thembones16
01-17-2006, 08:42 PM
okay the comps ready

jallas
01-18-2006, 09:37 AM
meh didn't really like either, but #1 at a push

chocolatguitar
01-18-2006, 04:47 PM
number twoo, but like jallas said, it's a push.

bassgaz
01-19-2006, 06:16 AM
number 2

thembones16
01-19-2006, 12:59 PM
thanks bassgaz

monstertaco
01-19-2006, 01:20 PM
one

Auals
01-20-2006, 02:17 AM
2, "by a push" as the rest of you have put it...

Salted_Peanuts
08-14-2006, 08:48 PM
No You All Suck|
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