some song i made [POWERTAB][Midi]


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01-18-2006, 11:12 AM
Any help or HELPFUL critisizm is welcome and wanted

01-18-2006, 11:20 AM
dude, that song aint bad, it sounds kinda like early bink, but like carousel. Its pretty cool, would love to hear it with some lyrics and proper instruments


01-18-2006, 05:45 PM
Here's some CRITICISM. Your song is too repetative. Take out some of those repeats and add some different chords progressions. Also, try to put a limit on the power chords, or if you're going to use them so much, do other things with them, such as having a lead guitar over them or an accoustic playing fuller chords.

01-19-2006, 03:17 AM
I agree totally. WAY too repetitive. The main riff was ok but you totally overused it.
And yes, try playing something else over the power chords to make it more interesting, like some lead, or even some other chords.

01-20-2006, 12:53 PM
theres a newer version is it better, only u kno

01-22-2006, 08:48 AM
the intro sounds fine, something that would make a good 1st track in an album, but its long
and the intro part kinda goes on and on, and sorta annoying....

*i didnt see the newer version because i only have gp5

01-22-2006, 11:33 AM
I like it :) its nice

01-22-2006, 11:57 AM
sux way to much repitition

01-22-2006, 12:09 PM
It's way to plain,dull/boring/repetitive.

It would sound ebtter with lryics but you haven't got lryics,so get creative.

01-22-2006, 03:48 PM
yeah, really reptitive, slow, boring, annoying. i would take some of the chords you hit like 40 times and hit them like 5 and speed the song up to make it more interesting.

01-23-2006, 03:31 PM
your gay
just like your song you suck

01-25-2006, 12:54 AM
well i dont really see u helping anyone out badnflunz by just calling them gay, it may be ur sexuality but dont force it on us please, by the way tanks everyone for the crit i appreciate it