some song i made [POWERTAB][Midi]


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young/young
01-18-2006, 11:12 AM
Any help or HELPFUL critisizm is welcome and wanted

stevo192
01-18-2006, 11:20 AM
dude, that song aint bad, it sounds kinda like early bink, but like carousel. Its pretty cool, would love to hear it with some lyrics and proper instruments

stevo192

hthedinga
01-18-2006, 05:45 PM
Here's some CRITICISM. Your song is too repetative. Take out some of those repeats and add some different chords progressions. Also, try to put a limit on the power chords, or if you're going to use them so much, do other things with them, such as having a lead guitar over them or an accoustic playing fuller chords.

Horvat
01-19-2006, 03:17 AM
I agree totally. WAY too repetitive. The main riff was ok but you totally overused it.
And yes, try playing something else over the power chords to make it more interesting, like some lead, or even some other chords.

young/young
01-20-2006, 12:53 PM
theres a newer version is it better, only u kno

zoltan256
01-22-2006, 08:48 AM
the intro sounds fine, something that would make a good 1st track in an album, but its long
and the intro part kinda goes on and on, and sorta annoying....

*i didnt see the newer version because i only have gp5

Greendayrule!!
01-22-2006, 11:33 AM
I like it :) its nice

hendrix&angus!
01-22-2006, 11:57 AM
sux way to much repitition

slash_620
01-22-2006, 12:09 PM
It's way to plain,dull/boring/repetitive.

It would sound ebtter with lryics but you haven't got lryics,so get creative.

metalzeppelin
01-22-2006, 03:48 PM
yeah, really reptitive, slow, boring, annoying. i would take some of the chords you hit like 40 times and hit them like 5 and speed the song up to make it more interesting.

badnflunz
01-23-2006, 03:31 PM
your gay
just like your song you suck

young/young
01-25-2006, 12:54 AM
well i dont really see u helping anyone out badnflunz by just calling them gay, it may be ur sexuality but dont force it on us please, by the way tanks everyone for the crit i appreciate it