[PT]Two Steps From Heaven


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Silent_Scream1
01-24-2006, 11:28 PM
Heres a little something i wrote after one of my close friends happened to pass away. I could have done better with the title but thats what came to my head.

So i hope you enjoy!!!

Silent_Scream1
01-24-2006, 11:34 PM
Please Crit all comments are welcome

Pure_Morning
01-25-2006, 02:06 PM
Short and melodic, sorry about your friend too. I bet he would love this piece.

Evian
01-25-2006, 04:57 PM
That was great. I loved it. Good Job.

Silent_Scream1
01-25-2006, 08:28 PM
Thx guys. but do you think theres any room for improvement or is there anything bad bout it?

HumanitysDeath
01-26-2006, 05:00 PM
Pretty good.
It felt kind of empty to me though.
Like there should've been more of a chordsy-rhythm or something.
But still, it was great.

zephyrclaw
01-27-2006, 07:10 AM
Wow! The established melody is great, and the song would probably be even more effective to you, as it has significant meaning. I wouldn't change anything major in it, if at all. There's not much to say - fantastic work!

saddam
01-27-2006, 07:48 AM
this is a very good piece, it sounds kinda medieval sometimes. I absolutely loved it !!!

les_paul_01
01-29-2006, 02:18 AM
that was really , really nice. there is nothing that i would change, it all works so all. oh and sorry about your friend.

slash_620
01-29-2006, 09:58 AM
Pretty good.
It felt kind of empty to me though.
Like there should've been more of a chordsy-rhythm or something.
But still, it was great.

agreed,but i still loved it,good job.

dream{M}theater
01-29-2006, 11:34 PM
Not much more i can say, great job.