(powertab) guitar solo over piano


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Night_Lights
01-25-2006, 12:12 AM
now the piano is NOT my doing, it is from Evians powertab 'Amy's song' which can be viewed here (http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=300511&page=1&pp=20)



anyway, i told her id write a solo over her piano interlude because i loved it, and well here it is. tell me what you think.


the solo is here (http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=300511&page=3&pp=20)
near the bottom of the page.

hthedinga
01-25-2006, 12:20 AM
First of all, I don't think you need to post a new thread for this. Putting that aside:

The first note of the fourth measure if off. It shouldn't break into something so fast like it did in the 5th measure. Very unfitting. Some of it also seems to be dissonant. You could do more with it rhythmically, rather than using a lot of straight rhythms. Don't just put in a harmony at the end if you only had single notes before. The 3rd and 4th notes of the solo could be dotted quarter to an eighth rather than two quarters. The flow is pretty lousy all around.

As for the good stuff...

The first part wasn't all that bad, with the exception of some notes and rhythms. The "3rd section" wasn't too shabby either. It just needs more rhythm and not so many notes.

If you'd like to see examples of what I'm talking about or just see another solo, check out the link in my signature.

Night_Lights
01-25-2006, 01:45 AM
ahh well.... at least i tried :(


i suppose ill take more than 15 minutes to write the next one :p:



btw the dissonance is intentional.

hthedinga
01-25-2006, 03:04 AM
The best thing to do it to get ideas out there and then come back to them several times. Then you get a better final product. As for the dissonance, people always say it's intentional when someone comment on it. Intentional or not, this dissonance didn't sound good. That's why I mentioned it.

Night_Lights
01-25-2006, 06:15 PM
yeah fair enough, its always good to hear from someone better than me







what parts specifically were dissonant? whats this about the 'harmony at the end'? i didnt do any harmony i think.... yes i will change the fast bit and then maybe change the rhythms a bit to make it less generic....

Silent_Scream1
01-25-2006, 08:42 PM
I really liked the song it sound good but it kinda lost its mood at the fast part of the solo.
I really liked the keyboard part

Good Job!!

Could you Crit mine?
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310844

hthedinga
01-25-2006, 08:54 PM
Dissonant parts:
3rd measure, 1st note
4th measure, 1st note

Dissonance isn't necessarily bad, but holding out a dissonance on the first note of the beat isn't a good idea.

As far as rhythm goes, try using some syncopation. Also, don't just fix the really fast section, fix the measure with all 16th notes.

The harmony I'm talking about is at the end. The last held out notes of the solo. They're really unfitting.

Night_Lights
01-26-2006, 04:04 AM
alright cheers ill work on that :peace:

OrgyJorgy
01-26-2006, 07:18 PM
That's great, I love that theme you had going before the fast part.

If you have time check out my songs

Verb Kicker!
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311458

EXTREME Song
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310867

i3lackmagik
01-26-2006, 08:35 PM
Use half bends rather than whole bends to make those two notes right. That's the only reason they're dissonant. As for everything else, when you are writing it a solo it will aid you greatly to keep in mind what chords you are writing over, and try to accentuate the notes that are in those chords in your leads. For example playing over C, try to 'land on' C E or G on either the on beats or on any long tones. This isn't necessary, but it's good to try and understand.

~i3~