(Powertab & Midi) Untitled
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01-25-2006, 11:19 AM
Just curious what other people thought of this.
'Tis only guitars and a piano just now.
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01-25-2006, 11:23 AM
That was really good. The only problem is that it repeats to much in my opinion. you should change it up a little bit.
Crit mine if you haven't already. It called Amy's Song.
01-25-2006, 11:38 AM
I love the riff with the triplets in it. Gives it a good edge.
As the guy above said, it's a bit repetitive but, god damn, it's so fluent and smooth.
Good use of Dynamics aswell ;)
I particularly liked the melody before the solo.
Check out mine please.
01-25-2006, 02:06 PM
You don't need the tempo at every new stave. Measures 37 and 38 were rad. Saem with 45 and 46. The last 2 beats of them could use a little tightening though I think. 77 could use some work. A little too dissonant. Not too bad overall. The flow isn't that smooth though. You had some good riffs and lines. It needs more organization and little going over.
If you'd like to comment on mine, that'd be great. The link is in my signature.
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