Metal Intro (Guitar Pro4)


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axe_grinder247
01-28-2006, 12:24 PM
helo thar!
this is just the intro to a song im writing plus the interlude riff, it has no name, so it's titled No Name (original, right?) need constructive criticism thanks...

slash_620
01-29-2006, 10:08 AM
mmmm...the main riff gets a bit annoying.

It starts off ok,but the effect is diminished every time it's repeated,and it doesn't go wll with the lead which you could also improve on.

I feel there needs to be a sense of inpending doom ya know?like in a lot of COB songs(living dead beat,triple corpse hammer blow)

atm your song isn;t building up to anything,and suffers from it.

axe_grinder247
01-29-2006, 01:18 PM
well, what exactly do you suggest for the lead? i think you're right about that repeats i was going to take it out anyway...we're very limited instrument-wise we barely even have a drummer (plus, idk how to work the drum tabs) and we dont have a keyboard, so a living dead beat theme really wouldnt work, COB has three guitarists and a bassist, we only have two plus bass, so it's hard to actually think up something with suspense to it...