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TrigFunction
04-30-2006, 01:32 PM
Ambition and Inspiration for 200 please

I am an anaerobic organism
Wondering if the weathers going to break
And with a little luck it will never happen
I?m making my shoulders become sore
And I attribute that due to the heavy lifting
Or the humidity.
I?m just searching for inspiration
and I?m really fit for nothing but reading.
Lately I?ve been doing everything but.
I?m just a hunter of inadequate synthetic fabrics
Eternally eradicating the failure of the miraculous
Whether I?m looking for ambition or inspiration
I still don?t know.
Someone taught me that ambition was just
Loving something you do well
and waiting for everything else to come to you
So can I search for ambition
and do I have the inspiration to find it?
Whichever will come first
I still don?t know.
I really just wish I could breathe.



Darker Side

Well **** you too!
I gave no reason for you to spit in my face
Make me believe there is innocence in you
Behind my back you want me erased
To hell with you!
Blame me for your fascist regime
Learn to keep your ignorant views
This anger will be the death of me

Well now you see, don?t you?
The darker side of all things around you
You can?t believe, that?s the truth
I live my life, what?s your excuse?
Without a heart there is no forgiveness
I won?t say sorry, say sorry to you
I can?t think of anything you do
To make me feel sorry for hurting you

Well now I?ll ask you why
Why every problem in your life is me
And now you count your lies
For every heart that breaks free
Try to equalise
Go create your own truth
Stir up the demons of your desire
My only sin was defending you

Well now you see, don?t you?
The darker side of all things around you
You can?t believe, that?s the truth
I live my life, what?s your excuse?
Without a heart there is no forgiveness
I won?t say sorry, say sorry to you
I can?t think of anything I can do
To forgive me of betraying you

Stand up high to watch me fall
Talk down from your own world
And with every thought that?s changed
Every heart will never be the same

Well I don?t need you
And now my rage will never go away
Begging the truth you hide
And an anger that will never fade
Now I?ll burn through
With the fire raging in my soul
And I?ll break through the walls
No you haven?t been betrayed

#1 synth
04-30-2006, 01:52 PM
THE TRIG FTW! but i actually liked the second alot more than i thought i would after i read the first line, good job to both

Dæmönika
04-30-2006, 02:51 PM
Blue I like more.

Final
04-30-2006, 04:14 PM
First.

Green_Fox
04-30-2006, 05:17 PM
i really love the second one. Blue

jallas
04-30-2006, 06:00 PM
firsty for me

kunvulshuns
05-02-2006, 03:50 PM
Didn't like the 2nd at all... RED

Gibson06
05-02-2006, 04:13 PM
red...

GhostGreen
05-31-2006, 11:04 AM
Red= Someone knows a few adjectives and throws them all together for the sake of sounding smart. That's not writing, that's using a thesarus. I think for now on, in these lyric contest, the writer should have to explain the plot or theme...because honestly, I don't even think the guy that wrote knows the signifigance of half the sentences he used.

Blue= Are you serious?

#1 synth
05-31-2006, 11:37 AM
is it really necesary to bump a 28 day old finished piece?

TrigFunction
05-31-2006, 11:53 PM
Red= Someone knows a few adjectives and throws them all together for the sake of sounding smart. That's not writing, that's using a thesarus. I think for now on, in these lyric contest, the writer should have to explain the plot or theme...because honestly, I don't even think the guy that wrote knows the signifigance of half the sentences he used.

Blue= Are you serious?

Ambition and Inspiration for 200 please

I am an anaerobic organism
Wondering if the weathers going to break
And with a little luck it will never happen
I?m making my shoulders become sore
And I attribute that due to the heavy lifting
Or the humidity.
I?m just searching for inspiration
and I?m really fit for nothing but reading.
Lately I?ve been doing everything but.
I?m just a hunter of inadequate synthetic fabrics
Eternally eradicating the failure of the miraculous
Whether I?m looking for ambition or inspiration
I still don?t know.
Someone taught me that ambition was just
Loving something you do well
and waiting for everything else to come to you
So can I search for ambition
and do I have the inspiration to find it?
Whichever will come first
I still don?t know.
I really just wish I could breathe.

How can you HONESTLY not understand this song, and if these words are too big for you WOW go to what 6th grade? The song BLANTANTLY says what its about. FINDING AMBITION SEARCHING FOR WHAT YOU WANT AND THE TOLL IT TAKES ON YOU. (btw that was REALLY hard to explain) If you cant understand easy words like that, YOU BUY a dictionary. BTW sense its so hard for you to understand what any one of those sentences mean, feel free to post which and will graciously explain them to you. ;) Your saying that Shakespeare was a bad writer because he wrote in a different form then that which was common? Or that any writer that doesnt write

"oh i broke up with my girlfriend"
"Ill always love you"
"dont ever leave me"
"I really want a ****ing razor"

SUCKS? sorry then, and outta way in bumping a very old thread, im gonna go read your good for nothing emo threads just for kicks and giggles :)

-Mike

#1 synth
06-01-2006, 12:24 AM
"oh i broke up with my girlfriend"
"Ill always love you"
"dont ever leave me"
"I really want a ****ing razor"

hey, no more dissing my lyrics, I try and I try but i just cant get a break, thats just a low blow man :mad: :( :cry:

... by the by, excellent pwnage right there :o O, and could Alice please close this.