Fatt Sorum vs. LucasGtrGod


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Fatt Sorum
05-02-2006, 06:53 AM
1 on 1: Fatt Sorum vs. LucasGtrGod
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Terrorism (Fatt Sorum)

When the sun started to set
Everyone had turned their heads
Wasted recreation time
Soon everyone was set to cry
Waves of suspicious sound appear
One looks back and starts the fear
And when the impact was made
Death?s mark all over the place
The lone man looks around
All the faces have split up
He just stares and sees
The sad picture of true degree

But as he sees, he also thinks
Whether humanity exists
Blood and fire fill every space
Cry for the mannequins? lace
He keeps looking at the sky
Thinking that he had died
And he says ?Is this all the world has to offer??

When everything is still
Fluorescent lights blink again
Drying up every drop
Stains of permanent sorrow
All the sudden rain drops
Extinguish the fire of curse
Bodies soaking in the rain
Waiting for their precious day
Rain washes down all the blood
These natural tears of mother sky
Washes all the wounds away
Crimes for my while go astray

Weary eyes of nature?s wind
Seems to cry all the time
Just praying for the day when all this stops

It?s only terrorism

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Harmless (LucasGtrGod)

I can see the path, but where did I go wrong?
Harmful breathing has poisoned you for too long
Now weeds grow through the bouquet
Where to your side they will stay
(Will I take them away?)

It?s the strength that fails, when I see your withered face
I?ve known it for so long, but now it is time to replace
On desolate ground I walk to where I?ll break
And I?ll realise my mistake as the memory fades

The heart is beating, but all now is unknown
Disastrous bleeding has left you alone
Now you stand here with your blood stained pride
And the scars you can no longer hide
(Your life fades away)

It?s the strength that fails, when I see your withered face
I?ve known it for so long, but now it is time to replace
On desolate ground I walk to where I?ll break
And I?ll realise my mistake as the memory fades
And as I said it was harmless in the end

.Sidewinder.
05-02-2006, 07:09 AM
I'm first :)..
voted second
don't really like the terrorism theme, and the 2 sounded better in my opinion.. gj both of you.

Final
05-02-2006, 10:16 AM
Meh, didn't care for either to be honest. But I thought the second one was a tad better.

Green_Fox
05-02-2006, 10:22 AM
second one

#1 synth
05-02-2006, 02:54 PM
numba 2

Fatt Sorum
05-08-2006, 07:06 AM
fine then, don't vote for me.... lol