Am I the next Joe Satriani???


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Salik Syed
06-17-2006, 02:04 AM
Judge for yourself!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=375135

Please play the song called "Afternoon in A major"

I wrote this song after being inspired by the song "midnight"
I know my tapping technique and recording is sloppy is pretty sloppy but i'm workign on it.

psychodelia
06-17-2006, 02:08 AM
One Joe Satriani is enough for me.

RustyGold
06-17-2006, 02:10 AM
Are pulling my my eye lids? That's so repetitive and un-musical...!
Interesting use of rubato, but you're clearly no Chopin...
And you ****ed up around 1:45 and numerous other places...

I liked it, and by liked it...I mean i didn't smash my computer to pieces while bemoaning the death of my soul, and falling into a spiral of bludgeoning depression . :(

yawn
06-17-2006, 02:10 AM
No, you're not :mad:

sheumack111
06-17-2006, 02:15 AM
Sorry buddy, no one can be Joe Satriani, i like your ideas, it needs more though..... You are only playing one note for each hand i think??? You need to use ornamentations to spice it up, and at times the timing seems to dissapear. Use a metronome and work out other notes for each hand (eg play the octaves or 5ths or 4ths) also when leading into a section try and use a 7th (leading note) this will help you blend back into the main theme.

sheumack111
06-17-2006, 02:16 AM
Ps your version of Midnight isnt the best.........

You miss tones of chords and there is no timing, you need to use a metronome!!!!!!!!!!!

Erc
06-17-2006, 02:17 AM
I don't think so.

It gets boring, very boring. The recurring theme is weak and the whole thing is lacking in solid ideas.

sheumack111
06-17-2006, 02:21 AM
Just listening to all your songs..... GET A METRONOME BEFORE I KILL YOU AND EAT YOUR CHILDREN!!!!!

yawn
06-17-2006, 02:22 AM
^ Dude, eating other people's children is not nice.

sheumack111
06-17-2006, 02:26 AM
dude listen to the timing and you will want to each his children aswell

MadMetalManiac
06-17-2006, 02:30 AM
Yeah it pretty much sucks

Shorrock
06-17-2006, 03:46 AM
its bad, and the fact that you said you were "the next satriani" makes it sound even worse as i was expecting somthing pretty amaizng.

Also your cover of midnight is awful